Tribe.net. Local Connections Dan http://BusVillage.tribe.net/thread/4973fd90-b4db-4217-af11-dd99c5c83ccd#947822a3-48d2-493c-820d-55f919965349 2008-12-15T16:05:42Z 2008-12-15T16:05:42Z

I went to your site, I hope you're open to constructive criticism . Problem #1, you don't show what the text is on the items !!!!!!!!!!! & you can't read it on the pics of the shirts. Who buys a ....anything not knowing what it says ?? #2 You only have one product. It is just on different formats. If this is a drop ship opperation, as I suspect it is, you should have more designs with the same theme. The upfront cost for multi designs is a neccessary evil, #3 forget the " please help me fullfill my dream of living in a bus" approach, It's a total turn off in terms of sales. #4 Yes, the name is lame. It doesn't inspire trust , sounds unstable, and is redundent. "The Gypsy shop " Is a place for Gypsys, as well as " wana'bes' to buy. Looking at # 1 & 2, The design is too busy, hard to tell whats going on. much shorter text, around the outside of the peace sign would work better. People have to pick up on T'shirt art very quickly for them to be popular " sell". I've been living off of my art, sales, wits.....for a long time. Just my $.02 ++ worth. Good luck, been thinking of going back on the road myself of late.

Dan 2008-12-15T16:05:42Z Gypsy http://BusVillage.tribe.net/thread/4973fd90-b4db-4217-af11-dd99c5c83ccd#0d865a2d-40c3-450b-b488-f65c0cb26a14 2008-12-14T12:51:11Z 2008-12-14T12:51:11Z

Hi! The links below are to my stores. I'm hoping they will help me to fullfil my dreams of one day owning a 36+ foot (I'm hoping for a 50') diesel school bus some day. I'm trying to raise between $5,000 and $8,000, which is about what it will cost for a mechanically sound used school bus. I plan on converting it to a bio-fueled Housebus using recycle material as much as possible. So every item you buy will get me that much closer to my dream. Hope you enjoy my stuff. I'll update this thread as the money comes in so everyone can see how close I'm getting. I'm working on some more art that will be focused towards Buses so check back here often for new links to new designs. Also the name of my shop is lame so if you have any ideas for a good name for my shop post it here. Thanks all! http://www.cafepress.com/GypsyShoppe1 http://www.cafepress.com/GypsyShoppe2 http://www.cafepress.com/GypsyShoppe3

Gypsy 2008-12-14T12:51:11Z